Re: [HOKEY] I-D Action:draft-ietf-hokey-preauth-ps-03.txt

[Yoshihiro Ohba <yohba at tari.toshiba.com>]

This version includes resolutions for WGLC comments.

Here is list of changes from -02:

- Added terminology section.

- Shorten the content of Appendix A and move it to Introduction.

- Moved contributors section to the end.

- Replaced 'mobile' with 'peer'.  Only Introduction section uses
'mobile device' before mentioning EAP.

- Added more clarification and details on pre-authentication use cases
in Problem Statement section.  Especially, added more text on the use
case for inter-AAA domain handover without trust relationship between
domains.

- Addressed all editorial comments including rewording specific
sentences and adding missing references.

- Reworded authentication and authorization procedure to network
access authentication and authorization.

- Replaced "Internet" cloud with "IP network" cloud in Figure 1.

- Revised Problem Statement section to avoid use of the term "subnet".

- Removed 802.11 specific examples on overlapping coverage .

- Clarified that context binding can happen after the peer arrives at
the target authenticator.

- Added text that trust relationship between serving and target
networks (or domains) is needed for indirect pre-authentication.

- Relaxed global IP address requirement.

- Added clarification text that the peer is not fully authorized until
it arrives at the target authenticator and completes link-layer
specific secure association procedure.

Regards,
Yoshihiro Ohba


On Thu, Jun 05, 2008 at 04:00:01PM -0700, Internet-Drafts at ietf.org wrote:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Handover Keying Working Group of the IETF.
> 
> 
> 	Title           : EAP Pre-authentication Problem Statement
> 	Author(s)       : Y. Ohba
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-hokey-preauth-ps-03.txt
> 	Pages           : 18
> 	Date            : 2008-06-05
> 
> EAP pre-authentication is defined as the use of EAP to pre-establish
> EAP keying material on a target authenticator prior to arrival of the
> peer at the access network managed by that authenticator.  This draft
> discusses EAP pre-authentication problems in details.
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