(5) improper wording related with IP addresses
IP addresses (in IPv4 and IPv6) are always assigned to an interface,
not to a host or 'machine'. Therefore, a Standards Track RFC
should never talk about '*the* IP address of a machine'.
FQDNs are also not necessarily unique for a 'machine', e.g. a server
having multiple, 'role-based' FQDNs.
Therefore, in Section 5.2, the last paragraph on page 11,
| <unicast-address> is the address of the machine from which the
session was created. For an address type of IP4, this is either
| the fully qualified domain name of the machine or the dotted-
| decimal representation of the IP version 4 address of the
machine.
| For an address type of IP6, this is either the fully qualified
domain name of the machine or the compressed textual
| representation of the IP version 6 address of the machine. For
both IP4 and IP6, the fully qualified domain name is the form
that
| SHOULD be given unless this is unavailable, in which case the
globally unique address MAY be substituted. A local IP address
MUST NOT be used in any context where the SDP description might
leave the scope in which the address is meaningful (for
example, a
local address MUST NOT be included in an application-level
referral that might leave the scope).
should say:
| <unicast-address> is an address of the machine from which the
session was created. For an address type of IP4, this is either
| a fully qualified domain name of the machine or the dotted-
| decimal representation of an IP version 4 address of the
machine.
| For an address type of IP6, this is either a fully qualified
domain name of the machine or the compressed textual
| representation of an IP version 6 address of the machine. For
both IP4 and IP6, the fully qualified domain name is the form
that
| SHOULD be given unless this is unavailable, in which case a
globally unique address MAY be substituted. A local IP address
MUST NOT be used in any context where the SDP description might
leave the scope in which the address is meaningful (for
example, a
local address MUST NOT be included in an application-level
referral that might leave the scope).