Re: [Syslog] Working Group Last Call: syslog-tls document

Here are a few gnits:

1. Section 5.3, para 1, sentence 2, ...multiple TLS Records.

2. Section 5.3, ABNF, It's not necessarily obvious that the numeric
fields are decimal (base 10).

3. Section 5.3.1, para 1, sentence 3, ...there is no upper limit.

4. Section 5.3.1, para 1, sentence 4, ...must be able to process frames
with...2048 octets.

5. Section 5.3.1, para 1, sentence 5, ...be able to receive frames
with...8192 octets.

More later...

John

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John Calcote (jcalcote@novell.com)
Sr. Software Engineeer
Novell, Inc.

>>> "David Harrington" <ietfdbh@comcast.net> 8/29/2006 3:47 PM >>>

Hi,

This message officially starts the Syslog Working Group Last Call for
the following document: 

http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-syslog-transport-tls-03

.txt

The Working Group Last Call for this document will end September 12.

To help get these document reviewed throughly, we are seeking
volunteers to review the documents for the following special reviews:
	1) Spelling and grammar,
	2) boilerplates and reference review, 
	3) security review

The chairs want to see a minimum number of content reviews before we
submit the documents to the IESG. If you review the document and it
looks fine, please post a statement that you have reviewed and found
the document acceptable. Obviously, if it does not look acceptable
please identify your objections, preferably with suggested text that
would make it acceptable.

Thanks,
David Harrington
dharrington@huawei.com 
dbharrington@comcast.net 
ietfdbh@comcast.net 
co-chair, Syslog WG 

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Re: [Syslog] Working Group Last Call: syslog-tls document

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