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[PWE3] Re: Comments on "draft-ietf-pwe3-ethernet-encap-09"

Dov,

That you for the comments. This draft is past the AD review stage, and I cannot make any changes to it.
However I have fixed all the spelling errors that you identified ( including the references ). These fixes should appear in the final RFC.
I is difficult for me to edit the document you attached , so I cannot send you a detailed reply. Please do not use the HTML document, a simple in line comment is much easier to read.

Luca


Dov Faust wrote:

hI,

Please find attached an HTML version of your document
draft-ietf-pwe3-ethernet-encap-09, dated Feb. 2005, with a few comments.

My comments are marked as [d1][d2]...[d10].

You may access the file using your browser or (as I did) just using MS-Word
and looking MS-Word comments - I get them as yellow background of the
commented text.

Regards,

Dov.Faust
(dov.faust at telrad.co.il)

Telrad Networks Rosh Ha-Ayin
Israel

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